Talk:Palomita Blanca (song)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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August 8, 2022Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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This will be reviewed by me over these two days --K. Peake 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Should you really use & instead of and in the infobox?
  • Swap the release sentence with the writing/production one
  • "It is a bachata acoustic ballad track about" → "It is a bachata acoustic ballad about" per WP:SEAOFBLUE
  • "was met with positive reactions from" → "received positive reactions from" making this the first sentence of the second para instead
  • Remove "for the track" after accompanying music video
  • Move the award sentence to being the second sentence of the second para in the new order, followed by the commercial one and then music video
  • Pipe Latin Award to BMI Film & TV Awards

Background and composition

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  • "Juan Luis Guerra released his seventh studio album," → "Guerra released his seventh studio album"
  • "his answer", Guerra states." → "his answer", Guerra stated." unless this is a book quote, then keep as it is
  • "new album in Miami. "I'm making" → "new album in Miami and he said: "I'm making"
  • "On February the following year, the singer gave" → "In February the following year, Guerra gave"
  • "and that would be released" → "revealing it would be released"
  • "Guerra's label, Karen Records, revealed" → "Guerra's label Karen Records, revealed"
  • "the album's productions" is the plural really suitable here?
  • "that it would still contain the aforementioned musical genres." → "it would still contain the genres he announced." or something similar, per this being a new para
  • Remove the word song after ballad because that is another way of saying song/track for a musical description

Promotion and reception

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  • Remove accompanying before music video since the term for implies this
  • "called it a" → "called the song a" starting a new para at this point
  • "referred it as one of" → "referred to it as one of the"
  • "as one of the record's" I don't think this is the appropriate introduction for a quote focusing on a "piece"
  • "hits of the midnineties."" → "hits of the midnineties"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "It was acknowledged as an" → ""Palomita Blanca" was acknowledged as an"
  • Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards
  • Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
  • "it became his" → "it became Guerra's"
  • Remove semi-colon at the end of the sentence

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks incredible at 5.7%!!!
  • Wikilink Broadcast Music, Inc. on ref 18
  • Remove or replace ref 20 since AllMusic chart positions can be edited anyone so this is unreliable

Final comments and verdict

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