Talk:Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
![]() | Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 12, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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Ridiculous wiki
editThis page is so ridiculous. Will Wikipedia make a page for every country in the world, for every JO session? Come on, this page is almost empty, 3 competitors for this country and a page? Please group countries for a region at least. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A01:E35:8B4A:86E0:A967:D5D6:8357:B5F3 (talk) 08:05, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Background
edit- Wikilink Naltar Valley and Ski Federation of Pakistan
- Add a link to 2010 Olympic Games that goes to 2010 Winter Olympics
- Link 1948 Games to 1948 Summer Olympics
Alpine skiing
edit- Add a link to 2014 Winter Olympics in the words 2014 Olympics in Sochi
- "He said he was not able to train much in Pakistan due to lack of snow." - due to a lack of snow.
- "Karim competed in the slalom event," - Karim also competed in the slalom event,
Cross-country skiing
edit- The wikilink for Winter Olympics should be in the background section
- "Human is Kirim' nephew." - Kirim's
- "Human is in the Pakistani army in addition to his participation on the national skiing team. The Ski Federation of Pakistan founded a school in his village, the same village Abbas is from. He began training internationally in 2010–2011." - Source?, also the last sentence here should read He began training internationally around 2010 and 2011. or something similar
- "the same village Abbas is from." - change the word in bold to place to avoid close repetition
- "For these Olympics, he spent time training in Turkey and Finland, along with some time he spent in Korea prior to the event." - change to For these Olympics, Human spent time training in Turkey and Finland, and also travelled to Korea prior to the event.
References
edit- Reference 1 is missing the author who wrote it
- The publisher in Referneces 7 & 8 needs to be in the work field and italized since it is a print publication
- Also, the work in Reference 8 should be The News International instead of The News
Will put this review on hold to allow the nominator to take some time to read the suggestions I have raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:18, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: I have addressed your concerns above. Kees08 (Talk) 03:29, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
- @Kees08: Nice. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:22, 12 July 2018 (UTC)