Talk:Pakistan at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:19, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

• I'll do this one next. Courcelles (talk) 16:19, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

• Dab link in flagbearer parameter in infobox.
  • Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
• Flag bearer for the closing ceremony?
  • Again, am still cannot find an source that says exactly who took up this role. MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
• "at the former event" Just say 2008, both events are "former" in time, making this use a little ambiguous.
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
• "and earnt the" earning?
  • Yep, now corrected. MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
• Since you bring it up, how does his mark here compare to Beijing? Not in medal colour, but in absolute distance?
  • Added this fact in a note. MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
• "In an interview The News International" In an interview with...
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

• Very minor niggles, good work. Courcelles (talk) 16:27, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

• • @Courcelles: Thanks again for another review. Everything that has been raised above has been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
    • Good work, promoted! Courcelles (talk) 17:31, 17 May 2018 (UTC)