grammar edit

"one of the only members" doesn't mean anything. i can't fix it cause i don't know what it's supposed to mean· Lygophile has spoken 14:01, 30 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

I came here to raise that line, too ! But I now realise that the KB article indicates that Paddy wasn't even in that band. -- Beardo (talk) 12:45, 25 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

Birth date 1952 not backed by source edit

The source for the birth date presented now, 9 December 1952, is a scan of a birth register table of contents of "Births in January, February and March. 1953" mentioning one Patrick Bush, mother's maiden name Daly (which tracks with Kate Bush) born in Woolwich. Something is wrong. 2A0A:A540:E62C:0:F8AB:1005:C3A8:1BE2 (talk) 15:37, 29 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

The source shows the birth was registered between Jan and March '53, rather than showing it took place then. This is a primary source anyway so it really should be replaced with a secondary one. This info is covered on page 13 of Graeme Thomson's 2011 Kate Bush biography, so I'll add that at some point. Crisso (talk) 20:35, 29 June 2022 (UTC)Reply