Talk:Pacific blue-eye/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Ealdgyth in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ealdgyth (talk · contribs) 13:44, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this shortly Ealdgyth - Talk 13:44, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Taxonomy:
- Links for zoologist, ichthyologist, entomologist, biogeographic dividing point, subclades?
- I paused before as I was worried about a sea of blue, so have now linked first three, and "biogeography" as the dividing point is self-explanatory. Subclade links to haplogroup - which is not at the right level. Have changed it to "lineages", subclade in this sense is better linked to "clade" so done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:28, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- "Alternative names include southern blue-eye and northern blue-eye." - do these get applied to the subspecies particularly or are both alternate names applied to both subspecies?
- Distribution:
- links for dune lagoons, salt marshes, tidal pools, mangroves?
- I think somethings missing here: "Within areas of fast, it shelters in areas of slower-moving water"
- Behavior:
- link estuarine environment?
- Feeding:
- Change of tense in this sentence is jarring: "The Pacific blue-eye forages using vision, and the turbidity of the water impacted on its ability to find food."
- References:
- What makes http://rainbowfish.angfaqld.org.au/Signifer.htm a reliable source?
- I randomly googled three phrases and only turned up Wikipedia mirrors. Earwig's tool shows no sign of copyright violation.
- I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:57, 10 May 2017 (UTC)