Talk:Outta My Head (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 17:23, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • with production done by the latter two - Hmm, care to replaced with a better word?
  • It is an electropop and Eurodance song, and its compositional structure noticeably different from the other songs on Echo - Something is missing here?
  • for a duration of three minutes and 39 seconds - consistency when dealing with numbers should be applied
  • UK - first occurrence, so use United Kingdom
  • The instrumentation of "Outta My Head" is different to the rest of the songs on Echo and does not follow the same styles of production - what actually does not follow the same style? The instrumentation or the song?
  • The lyrics of the song contain a "F**k you!" sentiment. - I am not sure about the utility of this sentence? Perhaps it needs an attribution.
  • up-tempo - isn't it uptempo?
  • The Independant - Something wrong here
  • Micahel Cragg - Same here

Please have a look at the references. There are quite a few issues. Everything else seems fine. A music sample would be great, preferably the chorus which seemingly received much praise from critics.