Talk:Ottoman ironclad Iclaliye/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No Copyvio Y
• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose suggestions

• "The design for Iclaliye was based on the earlier Asar-i Şevket-class ironclads built in France, though she carried a slightly more powerful armament consisting of two 228 mm" Perhaps "which were built in France" would work better.
  • How about "that had been built..." instead? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

    Sounds good. Passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:03, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

• That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:38, 17 April 2017 (UTC)