Talk:Ottoman ironclad Hamidiye/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No Copyvio Y
• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose suggestions

• "Her very lengthy construction period left her obsolete" perhaps "Due to her lengthy construction period, she was already obsolete by the time she was launched"
  • Works for me. Thanks for another review. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
• @Parsecboy: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 19 April 2017 (UTC)