Talk:Otto Bauer
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This article contains a translation of Otto Bauer from de.wikipedia. |
Early inspiration?
editThe first section states
an early inspiration for both the New Left movement . . .
but the EN wiki page for the New Left movement (linked) has absolutely no mention of this person.
Translation of German article
editI did some (relatively) minor reconstruction of the German article because it is almost entirely chronological, which fractures some of the topics, especially Bauer's attempts to unify Austria and Germany. I also added background material -- usually just a phrase or two -- where the author seemed to be assuming more knowledge of Austrian history than the average English language reader is likely to have. The background material was a bit more extensive in the section about the Linz program, where I used some information from the German article "Linzer Programm (Sozialdemokratie)", which has no English language equivalent.
Comments or feedback welcomed here or on my talk page. GHStPaulMN (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
Biased Language, Not Suitable for a Wikipedia Article
edit"Otto Bauer's multilayered world of ideas was characterized by an impressive but fragile mixture..." "...wishful thinking..." (in multiple places) "...fascinating analyses..." "...his weaknesses as a politician." 2604:CA00:15A:DB4:0:0:26D:73E3 (talk) 17:14, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
- I agree that the overly-emotive wording made the 'Analysis and wishful thinking' section especially read like an opinion rather an encyclopedia article -- and the fact that it was a direct translation from the German article doesn't make any difference. I stripped out the offending words and left it sounding quite a bit more even-keeled. Thanks for the feedback. GHStPaulMN (talk) 22:15, 28 October 2022 (UTC)