Talk:Oskar Sundqvist

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Review: June 24, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

"both their club youth and professional level" Plurals for level. Done
"Upon moving to North American" Done
Lead should also mention what he did with the Pens before he got traded. Done
There's some stats from his youth career that is available on the Pens' news article for the draft. Done
Would it be better to use his player profile on hockeylegan.se to show his debut? Done
"Penguins fourth line" Penguins'? Done
"Injured reserve list" should be in lowercase. Done
Ref 17 (TB recap) doesn't his debut, maybe find another source? Done
- This was ridiculously difficult to find.
Shouldn't "day" in the day with the cup be lowercase? Done
Any details on his games with Pittsburgh in 2016-17? Done
Might want to link Penalty (ice hockey) for penalty kill. Done
"Washington Capitals Tom Wilson" Add "player" between the team and the player name. Done
Charging (ice hockey) would be a good link, and lowercase the only time mentioned. Done
Use Skellefteå for consistency. Done
If he had a large contribution for the Pens during 2015-16 season, shouldn't the 2016 Stanley Cup be added to the honors section?
- Wasn't named on the Cup bc he didn't play enough games. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:57, 24 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 08:42, 24 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Nova Crystallis, done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:08, 24 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

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