Talk:Organized crime in Minneapolis
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Hello, this is my first time editing a Wikipedia Article so please correct my phrasing and sentencing in the article if you'd like. I found one notable example of the Minneapolis organized crime department which was A.A. Ames. I took most of the information from his own Wikipedia page to make sure the information was somewhat reliable. Feel free to correct it anyway. User:Napjack (User talk:NapJack) 13:52, 23 March 2022
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Hi! I recently edited this page to make grammatical sense (the tense of the page was inconsistent and the sentence was clunky to read) and added more information on the contents of The Shame of the Cities. I also tried to change the wording slightly so that this page felt more informative and less like a narrative. Thanks! Lwinterrrrr (talk) 00:45, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
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Hello! This is my first time editing on Wikipedia! I just edited one of the last sentences as it read more like a story than an encyclopaedic article. It was a minor change that conveyed the facts in a more direct way. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juliet1234567890 (talk • contribs) 05:37, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
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Hello! I noticed that there was a need for a citation so I added one where a book was mentioned. I added a footnote to the reference in the bibliography. In doing so it allows others reading the article to easily access information about the book to verify information :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juliet1234567890 (talk • contribs) 05:54, 23 March 2022 (UTC)