Talk:Optical mesh network

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Space.chris in topic Introduction

Introduction

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I tagged the article for a rewrite of the intro, and added the line "Optical mesh networks are a type of telecommunications network." as a starting point for the new intro. A good article introduction starts by saying what the subject of the article is, and describing it in general terms, for as general an audience as possible. Assume a casual reader who will read the first two paragraphs of the article and then stop, having learned all he or she needed to know about the subject. (And don't neglect the reader who only will read the first two sentences, needing only a simple definition.)--Srleffler (talk) 03:16, 1 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Wrote new lead and removed tag. Space.chris (talk) 09:58, 15 April 2018 (UTC)Reply