Talk:Online Gravity (book)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Pppery in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: This was a pretty good article overall, but some future suggestions:

  1. Don't use bare URLs; fill in proper citations
  2. It would be helpful to expand on the reception section and not just say "the book was reviewed by foo, bar, and baz"

Check out the edits I made to the article to see these tips and others in action..

* Pppery * it has begun... 02:37, 6 August 2022 (UTC)Reply