Talk:One Night's Anger

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Iaof2017 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:One Night's Anger/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:11, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Infobox edit

  • Alt needs a better description
  • Remove CD from the formats as that wasn't a standalone release

Lead edit

  • was issued → was first issued
  • Hersi → see more on overall
  • Add something from the critical reception

Background and composition edit

  • Fine

Critical reception edit

  • outspoken → given

Music video and promotion edit

  • For further promotion, she appeared to perform the song at various radio and television shows → when?

Festivali i Këngës edit

  • Fine

Copenhagen edit

  • The image doesn't add anything to the article, so please remove it
  • and three accompanied → and was accompanied by three
  • On stage, they performed → who is they? Does it include Hersi?
  • If the latter is true than the first sentance of this paragraph should merge with the last one

Track listing edit

  • Fine

Release history edit

  • Fine

References edit

  • Refence five is dead

Overall edit

  • There are several instance on this article you use her first name, you should use her last one "Matmuja".
  • Don't address any comments until I say so. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:55, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:52, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
I did some changes see if you are ok with them and let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:46, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Great, thank you alot!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:36, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply