Talk:One More Cup of Coffee (Valley Below)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Ippantekina in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 12:39, 7 September 2022 (UTC)Reply


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Lead

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  • "Dylan said the song was 'probably' influenced by" "probably" should be in quotation marks; alas, "probably" may be redundant anyways

Background and recording

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  • "his first releases to achieve this" does this mean it was his first two albums that reached No. 1?
  • A link to Hebraic (or a wikitionary link) could be useful
    • I've linked it - in the text following the quote rather than in the quote, per MOS:LINKQUOTE
  • Link Andalusian chord progression
    • Linked. (In the quote this time, as no other opportunity).) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
  • "Stoner told interviewer" the interviewer

Live performances

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  • No issues.

Critical reception

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  • ""sing not so much with as AT each other"" I think this is more mixed/negative than positive
    • I've added to this, which hopefully shows it was a positive review. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Cover versions

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Sources

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  • The Zollo source is not used anywhere in the article.
    • I've added it in, even through strictly speaking it's redundant, as the Margotin/Guedson source has the whole quote. The 1991 Zollo interview was original source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Overall

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