Talk:Oliver C. Dawson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:47, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Rem ref from lead
• "once held the heavyweight champion" is that supposed to say championship?
  • Fixed.
• "In football, Dawson served as the backfield coach in football " rem extra "in football"
  • Removed.
• Added an image
• Did you see any other info about his personal life or retirement life?
  • I found one source that had a little bit and added it.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:57, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:58, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:24, 22 October 2023 (UTC)