Talk:Ojos Así

Latest comment: 1 year ago by AJona1992 in topic GA Review

Translation

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Courtesy rtytrewerty accurate enough feel free to fix it, however I think it sufficient; human translations actually make sense as opposed to translators! 65.229.51.247 23:06, 28 October 2005 (UTC)Reply

I daniel(daniel625) added the correct title for the song as it was recorded in english, but left the translation as it would have been without the re-recording.

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Natassa Theodoridou

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I would like to point out that a Greek artist recently adapted "Ojos Asi".

The song is "Katazeititai" from Natassa Theodoridou (Νατάσα Θεοδωρίδου).

I know not how to edit the article properly and ask that anyone who does, do so if they wouldn't mind.

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ojos Así/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 20:54, 14 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
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  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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  5. It is stable.
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  • I don't think the single source used is strong or specific enough to label the song "Arabic pop". It is a Latin pop song with elements of general Arabic music, but that's not exactly the same as being part of that particular genre. I'd suggest looking for better sources for that statement, or state specifically that one writer has called it "Arabic pop".
I'm here, I'm just waiting for the full. review. Erick (talk) 18:01, 19 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
Alright, I usually start with a little sample of issues to see if nominators are even active. And I only realise now that you and Eric are the same... FunkMonk (talk) 18:12, 19 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
I'll get to work on this either Sunday or Monday as those are my only days off work. Erick (talk) 14:59, 22 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Shakira should be linked and presented again at first mention outside the intro.
  • "producer in the Hispanic market" Link to something. Either just Hispanic or if there is something for the Hispanic market.
  • "Equipment for the recording of Dónde Están los Ladrones? included" Present and link the album. Like "Equipment for the recording of her subsequent album Dónde Están los Ladrones?" or similar
  • "Dónde Están los Ladrones? took nine months to produce" I don't think you need to repeat the entire name of the album when it has just been mentioned in the former sentence, just say "the album".
  • "The track is sung half in Spanish, half in Arabic" Half? As far as I recall, there is one verse in Arabic and some backing, so half is a bit much, no?
  • "prompted American singer Gloria Estefan, Emilio Estefan's wife" This is the second time she's presented in the same section.
  • If you want to underline the Arabic angle, it's conspicuous that the section about live performances doesn't mention that she belly dances during the song.
  • No list of musicians for the recording?
  • I'd assume Arabic musicians would have been hired for the instrumentation, a process that could be interesting to describe if possible. In the MTV unplugged version, there are at least Arabic musicians and singers.
  • It seems like an oversight that an article about her probably only Arabic influenced song doesn't mention it's because she's half Lebanese and how this would have influenced it.
  • Was the English version released as a single?
  • "Shakira performing the song on The Sun Comes Out World Tour (2010–11)." How do we know it's this song specifically?
I'm requesting an extra week to work on this. Erick (talk) 01:59, 3 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
That's fine. FunkMonk (talk) 13:30, 3 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

It seems that Erick is busy IRL. If it is okay with the reviewer, I wouldn't mind jumping in to help Erick with this nomination. Best – jona 14:14, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Fine with me. FunkMonk (talk) 14:17, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
I believe I have fixed the issues that Erick had yet to complete. Let me know if there's anything else that needs to be done. Best – jona 17:25, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Looks good, the new source added about Arabic pop is better, but it confirms what I suspected earlier, and that the song can at most be said to have elements of Arabic pop, it is not itself an Arabic pop song. Here's what the source says: "as the song incorporates elements of Arabic pop and also includes Arabic song lyrics". So I think this still needs to be specified with more cautious language. FunkMonk (talk) 17:59, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
I have reworded the sentence. Best – jona 23:24, 12 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Nice, the intro needs a similar adjustment. FunkMonk (talk) 08:22, 13 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
  Donejona 12:53, 13 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Looking good, so I'll promote this now. FunkMonk (talk) 13:26, 13 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your review and allowing me to step in for Erick. Best – jona 16:36, 13 April 2023 (UTC)Reply