Talk:Ocean Park Hong Kong/Archive 1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Onanoff in topic Reworking
Archive 1

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Anyone has a picture of the seahorse on the slope? :-) — Instantnood 08:02, 2 December 2005 (UTC)

Cleanup

Can anyone specify what needs cleanup on this page? Insanephantom 10:46, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

There is one thing i would like to add. There is a new exhibit in Ocean Park that contains a HUGE selection of jelly fish. The exhbit is called Sea Jelly Spectacular and is locate din the merine land | DJ Ali DJ 2:56pm, 9 June 2007

I am currently putting more citations in the page. So please help. Chris! my talk 01:13, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

Uhh...anyone know what this: In the early operation of the park,the rapists were swarming the area. refers to?

Also the line: In September 2007, Ocean Park raised its prices by 10% for adults and 12% for children so they could profit more from their visitors. seems to be a tad cynical. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.3.2.111 (talk) 05:52, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

Updating needed

The balloon's come out already, got long queues. This section needs updating, and I bet there are a lot more things that need updating. but I'm not the best person to do it because I haven't been there for months. I only know about the balloon because it was there months ago and I see it in business nearly every day. Has anyone been to Ocean Park recently and seen all the new stuff? Limey26 (talk) 16:08, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Reworking

I've gone through the whole article and reworked the content, to make it less like a promotion piece by OP's marketing department.
The introduction now has more context.
But I haven't altered the basic structure much - it's still like a brochure - so that could be improved.
And we need more on the business side of the park, including perhaps a bit more on Allan Zeman, whose vision transformed the place. He wasn't even mentioned! (because the content came from the Park's own marketing, and he wasn't part of the story they wanted to tell.)
So please, jump in and take this improvement further. Onanoff (talk) 21:30, 17 October 2015 (UTC)