Talk:Oak Park Heights Prison

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Zoz0716 in topic Moving of page

I am a student at Minneapolis Community tech. College and a couple people in our class our working on this Wikipedia article to make it one of Wikipedia's Featured articles by adding three criteria that is considered to be a "featured aritlce". The three things we are adding ( or changing) is the Comprehensiveness of the article and making it better researched, also by changing the lead. I feel the lead of this artilce is very blah and doesn't do a good job catching the readers eye and telling the reader what is all going to be talked about throughtout the artilce itself. Also by making sure it has appropriate structure and adding section headings. For example this will be done through adding or changing the Introduction History design security conclusion Let me know if you have any other ideas —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mieritz533 (talkcontribs) 12:50, 13 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

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Moving of page

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Hello everyone-

Would like to move the page from Oak Park Heights Prison to Minnesota Correctional Facility - Oak Park Heights. This will place its nomenclature in line with the other prison facilities of the Minnesota Department of Corrections and will be more correct to its official name. Are there any objections? Zoz0716 (talk) 23:46, 2 September 2023 (UTC)Reply