Talk:Nyctibatrachus mewasinghi

Latest comment: 4 months ago by Grungaloo in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Grungaloo (talk · contribs) 23:57, 22 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi AryKun - only a few comments on this one! Let me know once you've had a chance to review. grungaloo (talk) 23:57, 22 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    See comments Issues addressed
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (inline citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    Sources check out, no copyvio.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Major aspects covered. Limited sources exist for this so good coverage of what's available.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Meets NPOV
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    No recent reverts or evidence of edit warring
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Appropriate images and captions.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    See comments Passed!

Comments edit

  • Could add a pushpin map but not necessary for GA.
  • Male/Female picture labels in speciesbox should be capitalized.
  • "The following cladogram shows relationships among three species," - "shows relationships among the three species". Since you just listed these 3 in the previous sentence I think you can make this definite.
  • "The side of the body is slightly lighter than the back, and underside is mainly off-white," - "and the underside is mainly off-white"
  • "the discs on third finger and fourth toe being well-developed and slightly wider than the finger and toe, respectively" - the discs on the third finger and fourth toe...
  • Grungaloo, all done. AryKun (talk) 12:15, 23 December 2023 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks! I'm happy to promote this. Congratulations on another great article and thanks for your work as always! grungaloo (talk) 15:58, 23 December 2023 (UTC)Reply
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