Talk:Nurses (Canadian TV series)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Ew3234 in topic Portrayal of Jews

Portrayal of Jews

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Ew3234: Thanks for putting in some sources about the episode featuring Jews. I think they're good but perhaps some adjustments are worth considering.

Spelling: MOS:PEOPLANG seems to say that either antisemitism or anti-Semitism is okay. but the Wikipedia article title is Antisemitism and "antisemitic" is the word that appears in the quotes that you used, so would be better in all sentences.

Orthodox: You say "Orthodox Jewish" but perhaps "Hasidic Jewish" is more accurate?

Young man: You inserted that the young man refused the graft. Are you sure? What are you looking at in the sources?

Older man: You inserted that the older man made objections "as reasons for the refusal". Again, are you sure?

A leader of American Jewish Committee: Why be vague? His name is Seffi Kogen. However, I don't advocate linking to the American Jewish Committee article. I do not know whether he is an official spokesman.

Lead: If this article were only about the one episode, the portrayal might belong in the lead. But I don't see that it has become prominent enough to be a large part of the lead here. How about a separate section = Portrayal of Jews?

Peter Gulutzan (talk) 18:43, 24 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thanks you, Peter Gulutzan. I made the changes you recommended. Ew3234 (talk) 20:29, 24 February 2021 (UTC)Reply