Talk:Nuclear Strike (Spooks)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 talk 04:13, 23 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

I will review sometime later today or tomorrow. Ruby2010 talk 04:13, 23 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

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  • The character did not say a word throughout the entirety of the episode, yet has such a strong presence, which the producers felt was unique for a guest star in the series. I think the sentence has some tense issues. Did you mean he had such a strong presence? And make it more clear that it was the producers who felt he had the strong presence.
  • When Sam Miller called Cross about the development, the writer included as a last minute addition to the script, and the sequence was shot the next day. I think there's a word missing.
  • There are two disambiguation links that need to be fixed.
  • I made a few minor corrections myself, and everything else looks great. Just address the concerns above, and it will be good to go. Thanks, Ruby2010 talk 16:28, 23 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
Done. -- Matthew RD 21:39, 23 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
Looks good. Pass for GA. Nice work, Ruby2010 talk 22:27, 23 March 2011 (UTC)Reply