Talk:Now is Not the End/GA1

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 18:43, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for a review. Looks pretty close to being spot on from a quick skim, so I'm doubtful my comments will be anything more than minor nitpicks. Miyagawa (talk) 18:43, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

• A few duplicate links, but nothing major:

• Peggy Carter in the first line of Development
• Edwin Jarvis, Howard Stark and Anton Vanko in the first paragraph of Casting
• Captain America in the second paragraph of Casting
• Roxon Energy Corporation in Marvel Cinematic Universe tie-ins

• Casting: "Anton Vanko was previously portrayed by Yevgeni Lazarev in Iron Man 2. Ronin plays a younger version of the character" - In order to properly link those two arguments, I'd remove the full stop in the middle and replace with a semicolon.
• Design: "The war term "Mend and Make Do" really" - when you have a quote within a quote like this, swap the quotation marks for the interior quote and replace with apostrophes.
• Cite #14: There's actually a Template:Cite tweet for that.

• That's the lot - I knew it was just going to be nitpicks from the first read through. Placing on hold as normal. Miyagawa (talk) 11:10, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
  •  Done for everything - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:25, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
    • Great, happy to promote to GA. Miyagawa (talk) 18:21, 28 August 2016 (UTC)