Talk:Norwood Depot/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Pi.1415926535 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:34, 22 February 2022 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • In the lead, "with a mini-high section for accessibility. The" overlinked.
    •   Done
  • "The Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority (MBTA) began subsidizing" could link.
    •   Done
  • "through Norwood. Norwood Depot" repetitive, could reword perhaps?
    •   Done
  • " it is substantially" the last "it" was a car park. Perhaps "the station is substantially..."?
    •   Done
  • "Dedham).[6][1] D" ref order.
    •   Done
  • "the NY&NE petitioned" add this abbreviation in after the first use of the expanded description.
    •   Done
  • "Boston.)[14][15][1] The" ref order.
    •   Done
  • "completed.[19][3]" same.
    •   Done
  • "open.[23][3] Service" same.
    •   Done
  • "an $11 million track" inflate.
    •   Done

That's it, on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:34, 22 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review! I've addressed all the items above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:09, 22 February 2022 (UTC)Reply