Talk:North/Northwest Phoenix

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Ajmurph in topic Critique

Critique

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Facts are referenced, but might also come from less-than-A-tier sources, like 'Ghosttowns.com', which is more a blog than an informational site. Everything is relevant to the article, and the article topics, and I found nothing that distracted. Overall, the article is good, could maybe use more information, everything seems up to date, and the writing itself is good. Would pictures for specific locations, like the Paradise Valley Mall, be good? Where/what else can be drawn from as sources, maybe old area newspapers? Ajmurph (talk) 02:36, 5 April 2017 (UTC)Reply