Talk:Norman E. Rosenthal
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review
![]() | Norman E. Rosenthal has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. | |||||||||
|
This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
![]() | This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||
|
photo
editI put the photo back because the permissions were changed by the copyright holder on Wikimedia. Lalulorlor (talk) 19:36, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
Info box
editNeeds some tune up. Help! :-) -- — Keithbob • Talk • 21:04, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
- Looks like the bot got it! -- — Keithbob • Talk • 16:44, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
GA Review
editGA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Norman E. Rosenthal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 21:31, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found
Linkrot: one found and tagged.[1] Jezhotwells (talk)
Checking against GA criteria
edit- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
In 1984, Rosenthal pioneered seasonal affective disorder, coined the term SAD, and began studying the use of light therapy as a treatment. this does not read well, perhaps "In 1984, Rosenthal pioneered research into seasonal affective disorder, coined the term SAD, and began studying the use of light therapy as a treatment.The lead does not fully summarise the article, please read and apply WP:LEAD.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Sources appear reliable, all significant statements are cited, no evidence of WP:OR.
- Ref #8 is a dead link.
- It would be good to use citation templates to display full details of citations.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Good coverage
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
Is there any criticism of his works? This seems to concentrate just on the positives.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Stable
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- One image used, licensed and captioned.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- On hold for seven days for the above concerns to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:53, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for your quick response. I am happy to pass this as a good article. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 16:45, 22 October 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Thank you for your initial evaluation and suggestions. Today I have:
- Rewrote awkward sentence you cited above.
- Removed dead link and obsolete source which was only a supportive, self published citation anyway.
- Expanded and improved the lead.
- Standardized all citations following the order set out in the citation template
- Added criticism of his research on SAD. I checked every source listed in the article and this was the only criticism I could find -- — Keithbob • Talk • 16:35, 22 October 2011 (UTC)