Talk:No Exit (Miami Vice)

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Date	Process	Result
August 8, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Miami Vice episode "No Exit" had its title changed from "Three-Eyed Turtle" when it was discovered the latter was sexual slang?

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GA Review edit

Latest comment: 11 years ago16 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

Add "running time" to the infobox
Done. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lede

NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
For the second paragraph, how about add: "The show centers on ..." followed by "In this episode, ..."
Done both. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Plot

FBI should be Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) per MOS:ACRO
Removed the pipe, left as full name. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Add actor for "Tony Amato"
Add actor for "Rita Amato"
These were both already present. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Production

Paragraphs shouldn't have images on the left for the very first. Move image to right size per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
Moved to right. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
Done above. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Reception

Why is "first broadcast" being used in one, and "premiered" in the lead? Choose only one please.
Two terms meaning the same thing are used to keep the prose varied and not sounding repetitive, it'd be worse to change to repetitive phrases. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Unlink NBC; it has already been linked once
Done. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Don't think every repeat/airing needs to be listed. Only the original airing for countries
Left it in, it's not really undue given how little broadcast information can be found and sourced. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Link Miami Vice
Linked on first post-lead mention. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

References

Ref. 1 is missing publisher (The Onion)
Ref. 10 has WP:DASH issues
Allrovi is missing publisher (Rovi)
Ref. 13 is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
Fixed all; though Rovi is a Welsh magician. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

External links

Add "television" portal to the side
Add TV.com episode link
Categories should be in alphabetical order
Done. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Great work. On hold for now. TBran dl ey 20:52, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, everything's either been addressed or corrected. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'll pass the article. Congrats! TBran dl ey 23:41, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

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