Talk:No. 33 Squadron RAAF/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Retrolord in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 13:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Happy to review this RetroLord 13:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

A few points:

Thanks, RetroLord 14:14, 25 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Not really sure what more I can do in this review, the article seems perfectly OK. I expect i'll pass it over the coming days provided nothing else jumps out at me. Thanks, RetroLord 19:29, 28 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
  1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
  1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

"fell through" Seems a bit colloquial? Could you rewrite?

" personages" That seems a bit tooooo formal. Could you rewrite?

"Omega Air" Can we bluelink this?

2. Verifiable with no original research:
  2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
  2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
  2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
  3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
  3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
  4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
  6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
  7. Overall assessment.