Talk:Nikolay Dupak

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LapisLeafuli in topic Reworking Structure And Wording

Reworking Structure And Wording edit

I don't fault the original author of this article for this as they don't appear to be a native English speaker but this article likely needs to be reworked a fair amount. While words are spelled correctly from what I've seen, the sentence structure and way in which information is presented isn't how English is typically written. I've already made a number of edits to make the article flow better but I feel like this article requires more major reworkings. LapisLeafuli (talk) 16:10, 26 March 2023 (UTC)Reply