Talk:Night of Your Life (David Guetta song)

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ozurbanmusic in topic GA Review
Good articleNight of Your Life (David Guetta song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
December 4, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Night of Your Life (David Guetta song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 01:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • disc jockey (DJ)-music producer → DJ and producer
  • additional vocals from → guest vocals by
  • former's → Guetta's
  • . Production for the song was also handled by Guetta and Tuinfort. → , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort.
  • Music critics → Link
  • generally positively → Poor phrasing, use only positively

Section Done. Calvin Watch n' Learn 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Background

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  • , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort. → Use the same as what I have suggest for consistency.
  • Guetta revealed that he did not know Jennifer Hudson that well and commented: → Guetta revealed that he did not know Hudson before collaborating on the song, saying,
  • Several long quotes, can the longer ones be paraphrased.
  • "Night of Your Life" was released for digital download on August 22, 2011, as the third and final promotional single from the album, as part of the iTunes Store's countdown to the album's release.[3][4] → Why is this a solo sentence, include as part of the paragraph.

Section Done. Calvin Watch n' Learn 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Composition

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  • Again, this is made up entirely of quotes. At least two need to be paraphrased.
  • The audio file caption, could you not make it a bit more informational and interesting? What is it about the chorus?

Section Done. Calvin Watch n' Learn 22:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception

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  • Again, lots of quotes. Try to paraphrase some.
  • Link "Repeat"

Chart performance

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  • Considering the amount of charts the song charted on, this section is quite small. This could be such a good section. Look here for example, it's so easy to see the countries it chart in and the songs charting history.

References

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Are actually pretty good!

  • All of the ...charts.com references should, for example, have the work parameter as norwegiancharts.com, not VG-Lista.

Overall

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This is a great little article! Not much to sort out, on hold. Calvin Watch n' Learn 02:18, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Passed! This is a great little article. Calvin Watch n' Learn 02:47, 4 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thank you! :) Oz talk 05:30, 4 December 2011 (UTC)Reply