Talk:Ngee Ann Kongsi

Latest comment: 9 years ago by EdiOnjales in topic Moved Material

The tone of some of the sections of this article makes it read like a press release bordering on advertising. "Fixing" this issue would require massive cuts to the article and would certainly alter the author's original intent. Unsure how to proceed. Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:48, 2 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Moved Material edit

I removed a fairly large amount of material from this article to what I felt were more appropriate locations. (1) I took a big chunk from the section on the Yueh Hai Ching Temple and added it to that article, and (2) I created an article on the Ngee Ann Cultural Centre using material taken from this one. Both of those articles (particularly the second one) could still use a fair amount of work, especially in terms of references, but I don't know enough about the topic to do much about it. If you're interested in/knowledgeable about Ngee Ann, I'd strongly encourage you to have a look and see what you can do to help. Thanks!! -- edi(talk) 16:27, 13 March 2015 (UTC)Reply