Talk:Newfoundland expedition/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by AirplanePro in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 00:58, 13 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Comments from DustFormsWords

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Could I suggest that the section header "Bull's Bay" is an inappropriately short section (being one sentence) and should be merged to another section? And also that the quote in that section does not comply with our policy on quotes (incorporated under criterion 2(b) of the GAC) in that it is a full sentence quote not attributed in the article body, and that it makes inappropriate use of the pull-quote format and should instead be regularly incorporated into the article prose. - DustFormsWords (talk) 04:49, 14 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

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Failed as unresponsive and grossly unready. The last few sections need expansion and differ between the two Tocques in the citations. Wikicopter what i do s + c cup|former 00:57, 20 February 2011 (UTC)Reply