Talk:New York State Route 45/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Lpangelrob in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    km should be rounded to the tenth (or hundredth, as in the infobox), not the nearest whole number. "NY 45 is a relatively quiet road" - I'm not sure what this means. If it means relatively fewer cars based on AADT numbers, say that explicitly. :-D "Traffic here tends to pile up many times a day." - subjective. Cite a news source, or remove. "During the 1960s, the New York State Department of Transportation (NYSDOT) noticed a population boom in Rockland County." - poorly worded... maybe they reacted to the complaints of residents (the same ones who later cancelled the bypass), but if they were being proactive, cite a source (or use the one given) and say so.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    See above
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Half the mileposts are missing... why?
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Not bad so far! Good luck!
Done - I believe I've solved it all.Mitch32(UP) 00:49, 2 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
Got it, looks good. —Rob (talk) 14:27, 2 July 2008 (UTC)Reply