Talk:New York State Route 420

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review
Good articleNew York State Route 420 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
June 10, 2009Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:New York State Route 420/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Comments:

  1. The lead of the article is a little short. Can more information be added?
    Not really; the vast majority of NY 420's routing is fairly unremarkable as is already indicated in the lead. I also believe the level of detail in the lead regarding the route's history is sufficient. If you have any specific ideas on what is missing or could be added, please advise as I don't see a lot of possibility for expansion myself.
  2. "as it passes by several buildings, ranging from industrial warehouses to residences." sounds wordy. "as it passes by industrial warehouses to residences." would suffice here.
    Reworded.
  3. In the route description, you use NY 420 in almost every sentence. Can more variety in wording be used?
    Reworded several.

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:39, 8 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. – TMF 18:07, 8 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 18:59, 8 July 2009 (UTC)Reply