Talk:New York State Route 300

Latest comment: 13 years ago by TwinsMetsFan in topic Rewrite tag and attention rationale

Change of Intersection Template edit

This article was changed to bring its intersection template to the NYint format. No other changes were made. It is important to verify, update and/or correct as necessary. Fwgoebel 18:41, 1 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

Rewrite tag and attention rationale edit

I tagged this article for several reasons:

  1. The route description is a mess. There are paragraphs that are too short, there are paragraphs that are too long, and there's a bulleted list in the first subsection that has nothing to do with the route's description. On that note, the description is a strange mish-mash of a description of the route and the history of the route and other things along it - and the latter shouldn't be here. The second paragraph of the North of I-84 section is a pretty good example of this.
  2. The history is poorly written, incomplete, and bounces around chronologically. Also, the references are very substandard and in some cases incomplete. Examples:
    • "Article by Judy Rife in the Middletown (NY) Times Herald Record Tuesday, September 22, 2009, page 28." - lacks a title, thus it fails WP:V
    • "Old Town property maps on file in the Town of Newburgh Town Hall." - fails WP:V. If the individual maps were cited using {{cite map}}, this would be acceptable.
    • "Official list of road names in Town of Newburgh for use by 911 Emergency Officials, Town Clerk's Office, Newburgh, New York" - this likely fails WP:V as well, but if not there's surely a better reference out there to replace this.
    • In fact, every reference but the first two has at least one issue. – TMF 23:46, 23 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Resolved, for the most part. – TMF 04:46, 12 July 2010 (UTC)Reply