Talk:New York's Reforming the Energy Vision

Peer review by Hengrui

Hi Young, this is Hengrui. I think you have made some good progress on your Wiki article. There are few things that might help you to improve the articles. 1: Lead session The lead session is clear, I think it might be even better with more information. As a reader, I hope to know more about REV in the lead session. Right now, the information provided is limited. 2:reference and citation On the section of REV tracks and Utilities , I don't see any citation. I think it would make your article more reliable if citation is included in those two session.

Overall, it is a pretty solid start.