Talk:Neurologic music therapy
Latest comment: 7 years ago by StartingRightNow in topic Comments
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edit- Mobile Music Touch should be deleted. It is a small project with only limited scope within this field. Perhaps the authors have taken liberties here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:C1:5:48B0:E101:795B:2A06:3791 (talk) 00:15, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for your work on this subject
- Please link music therapy in the lead and body of the article, and remove the see also section as it is unnecessary at this point thanks
- More to come Biosthmors (talk) 21:01, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- Don't ask questions in the article. More to come. Biosthmors (talk) 21:45, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- The fifth and sixth words "defined as" are unnecessary. Biosthmors (talk) 05:18, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- Neurologic music therapy (NMT) is repeated twice in the lead, that's unnecessary. Just abbreviate once.
- The first three sentences are odd. They all sound kinda like alternate definitions. Can we just get one sentence out of those three?
- The article states it is "research based". I'm not sure what that means. Evidence-based medicine has a specific definition. Might there be a Cochrane Collaboration review on the subject?
- Why is http://www.colostate.edu/dept/cbrm/academymissionstatement.html a reliable source for statements about music therapy? It's not third-party, in my opinion, see Wikipedia:Rs#Overview
- Per WP:HEADINGS there is no need to capitalize section headings.
- Can you link to Brodmann's area? WP:Red links are OK too. They help build the encyclopedia. Biosthmors (talk) 05:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- If the "Neurologic music therapy" page re-directed to the "Music Therapy" page, a merge would make logical sense. It is, after all, only one of many forms of music therapy. The article does not appear so dense as to merit a whole page of its own. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StartingRightNow (talk • contribs) 06:31, 1 May 2017 (UTC)