Talk:Netherlands Antilles at the 1992 Winter Olympics/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 20:39, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
I'll have a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 20:39, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
Initial review
Lead edit
- Unlink France. Per WP:OVERLINK, linking countries is discouraged unless there is real significance.
- Could perhaps briefly explain why this was the Antilles' final appearance.
- Albert Carpentier Alting is a redirect. Pipe the link if you wish to use his full name.
Background edit
- Albert Carpentier Alting is a redirect here also.
Bobsleigh edit
- Unlink Alting and den Dulk, both linked in the previous section.
- Alting uses Bart here but Albert in the previous two mentions.
- I'm viewing on mobile but, there seems to be a slightly excessive amount of space between the text and the table.
References edit
- Ref 9 needs an accessdate. Maybe I'm missing it but, I'm not sure where the date field comes from either.
- Neither am I, I was using my alt to write this on a browser with no spellcheck and very different citation fillin scripts than I'm used to! Courcelles (talk) 01:17, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
- Date formats are quite varied, for example most of the archive dates are YYYY-MM--DD but the access dates are different. Maintain one style for consistency.
I fixed two small typos alongside incase you wish to check. A couple of small issues here, placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 20:53, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks. Think I fixed the date formats, though consistency of date formats isn't really a GA requirement, either. Everything else taken care of, thanks for the review! Courcelles (talk) 01:20, 22 October 2018 (UTC)