Talk:Nero Julius Caesar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:35, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:35, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (Highest rate is 2.9%, due only to the title of citation being in the work cited.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

• He and his brother enjoyed accelerated political careers as heirs of the emperor. Suggest As a result of being heirs of the emperor, he and his brother enjoyed accelerated political careers.
• one-time governor of Syria add a the in front of this.
• began bickering and entered a feud during which Drusus became Suggest began bickering and entered a feud. During this time, Drusus became
• By this time his comma between time and his
• Like members of the imperial family, Sejanus' birthday was to be honored. Suggest Sejanus' birthday was honored as if he were a member of the imperial family.
• the exact reasons for this remain unclear. change to the exact reasoning for which remains unclear.
• @SpartaN: That is all my comments, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:34, 16 January 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: I appreciate the review. Implementing changes now. SpartaN (talk) 01:42, 17 January 2018 (UTC)