Talk:Neighborhoods (Blink-182 album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 06:02, 27 January 2014 (UTC)

No reason this should be on GAN for so long! I'll review this.

• First, source for where it was recorded?
• Opening sentence should probably be "was" not "is"
• Source for release date?
• What is "The band's studio autonomy"?
• You mention the recording starting in February 2009 after the band's reunion... twice in the lead. Any way to cut out one of them?
• "Despite this, Neighborhoods did not connect on the same scale as earlier releases and the band would depart from Interscope the following fall. " - what does it mean "connect on the same scale"
• "and a fatal plane crash involving Barker" - this implies Barker died. You should clarify that ASAP he wasn't killed. Also, is it worth mentioning where the crash happened?
• "DeLonge found out via the TV news at an airport while waiting to board a flight." - the news of the crash? Or the rumor of the reunion? The wording could be clearer.
• "One was 'Do you remember who we were?' and the other was 'This is who I am now,' " DeLonge says. "It was a good moment to put the shit aside." - is the quote needed?
• "The album sessions will be partially documented in The Blinkumentary" - is this still forthcoming?
• Watch for overlinking in "Touring and aftermath" section
• Should you add in the aftermath section that as of 2014, they're working on a new album?

All in all, pretty good article! This shouldn't be too difficult to take care of. Lemme know if there are questions. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 06:02, 27 January 2014 (UTC)