Talk:National Weather Service Lincoln, Illinois/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by MWOAP in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: /MWOAP|Notify Me\ 20:33, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
Criterion edit
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
To Work On list (specifics) edit
- 2b: Reference 8 is unreliable.
- 2b: ISBN's for those books?
- 3b: Opertaions is really short, and does not have that much detail. Room to expand.
- 3a: is it possible to say any major events that the service has covered?
- Yes it is possible, however due to the history of NWS Lincoln and its predecessors there are almost too many incidents to cover without it turning out like WP:NOTDIRECTORY and is probably more akin to a article on the climatology of Central Illinois (which I would like to create). But if you can shoot me an idea about how to include it I will be more then happy to add the information. -Marcusmax(speak) 01:40, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- I am thinking more just some of the major ones (with a breif overview), and then when you create the article, you can put the main article template up. Is this possible? -- /MWOAP|Notify Me\ 01:09, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
- Of course! I will get on it right now. -Marcusmax(speak) 22:43, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
Comments edit
Please do not change the status of the criterion, the reviewer will change that their selfs.
- Thank you for the review, I will address the issues you have cited over the next day. Thanks -Marcusmax(speak) 19:09, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
- At least one of the floods of 1956-1957 which struck Illinois could be relevant here. See the external link section of Hurricane Audrey for more on those, and other, flood events which impacted Illinois. Thegreatdr (talk) 00:09, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
- Yes it would seem many tropical cyclones (after transitioning into extra-tropical systems) have caused flooding events, Hurricane Ike comes to mind. -Marcusmax(speak) 02:05, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
- I'm not sure the word many should be used in relation to flooding in Illinois from tropical cyclones. Thegreatdr (talk) 05:04, 24 April 2010 (UTC)