Talk:National Irrigation Congress

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Pbsouthwood in topic Needs better introduction

Needs better introduction

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This introductory does not follow the convention of providing a summary definition in the first paragraph.

The first paragraph reads:

The National Irrigation Congress was held periodically in the Western United States beginning in 1891[1] and ending in 1916, by which time the organization had changed its name to International Irrigation Congress.[2][3] It was a "powerful pressure group."

The only part of the above which provides a "what it is" definition is "powerful pressure group", which itself is quote and not sufficiently descriptive.

73.37.148.173 (talk) 22:03, 9 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

I came here to say the same thing. What is/was it? · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 18:55, 27 July 2022 (UTC)Reply