Talk:National Assembly Building of Slovenia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• I would recommend keeping only one pronunciation in the lead so that it looks a bit less clumsy (see WP:MOSLEAD); the pronunciations can be stated in the infobox.

•  Done

• We do not keep citations in the lead unless we make significant claims. Not a strict rule, just felt I should mention it.

• Cite number 1 (visitor numbers) has no other place in the text or infobox which it can be placed, cite number 2 now moved further down

• (Skupščina Republike Slovenije, It was opened Something wrong with the bracket?

•  Done

• People's Assembly Building of the Republic of Slovenia and Palace of the People's Assembly need not be in bold.

• I think they do, as previous names for the place.

• You should add the Parliament (Parlament) as an a.k.a. name in the first line.

•  Done

Construction

• of 394 feet (120 m) What is this? The height? The base diameter?

•  Done clarified height

• A new legislature building was thereafter...bronze figures framing its main portico. Source?

•  Done

• Twenty-seven master craftsmen As per WP:MOSNUM you should say "27", it would also appear less wordy.

•  Done

• It was completed in 1959. Source?

•  Done

• At the 1991 independence of Slovenia Better say "After the independence of Slovenia in 1991".

•  Done changed to "following"

Design

• the main façade faces Republic Square and is inlaid with Karst marble, with green Oplotnica granite below each window. Does ref. 6 support this as well?

• That's supported by refs 6/3/7

• wall painting by the 20th century mural artist Slavko Pengov, extends across the length of the entrance hall and illustrates the history of Slovenians Does ref. 4 support this as well?

• It can, but ref 8 is there to do that

• the mural portrays events including You give the years for some events and not for others. Would be good to have consistency.

• The events which took place within a year have theirs. The world wars don't need to have years on and the last two items are connected to WWII.

• Following the 1991 independence of Slovenia No need to mention the year again, we know this already.

• What's the harm?

• Not adamant on this, just a suggestion of mine. Fine, keep it as you like. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:37, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• Link or explain amphitheater

•  Done

• Duplicate links: independence of Slovenia, Slovenian Parliament

•  Done

Incidents

• Link granite, euro.

•  Done

That should be it. These done, I would be glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:34, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Changes made as ticked above. Rcsprinter₁₂₃ (interface) 19:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick replies. I believe the article is ready for promotion now. Great job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:39, 8 April 2016 (UTC)