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Latest comment: 1 year ago5 comments2 people in discussion
Hello, Rosguill, Thank you for you help in identifying where the article needs work, I have made some attempts to remove all non-natural language used in the article and have gone through and replaced or added sources so information is not depended on Primary sources. Is it possible to get another review and possibly point where the article needs further improvements? Thanks! SecureJane (talk) 10:35, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
I still see a fair amount of non-neutral language in that section, as well as the inclusion of trivial examples: individual fundraiser events are unlikely to be significant enough to really warrant WP:DUE mention in a biography, and shouldn't be included unless there is extensive coverage of Tsukanova's involvement. signed, Rosguilltalk 15:23, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Hey Rosguill, After another read through and fix up, i feel like I've removed the non-neutral language, could i possibly get an example of where the article still contains such language if it remains? Additionally, after removing sources from the philanthropy section i was wondering as to if there is a problem with the last two sources? Again thank you for you're feedback, its much appreciated, and will aid in improving my future edits! SecureJane (talk) 10:14, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
I went ahead and removed those two segments and removed the tags as now-addressed. While the sources were reliable, Tsukanova's involvement was barely discussed in their coverage, to the point that it didn't seem WP:DUE to include in the biography. signed, Rosguilltalk 15:50, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Ahh i see, Thank you you're help in improving the article, its Much appreciated for future reference Rosguill! SecureJane (talk) 09:15, 23 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
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