Talk:Natarajasana/GA1

GA Review edit

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Article has passed. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:16, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Onegreatjoke (talk · contribs) 05:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hello! I have come to review this nomination to see if it's worthy of being a GA. This is going to be my third review so if I do something wrong then please notify me. Other than that, I do hope to see this article pass. Onegreatjoke (talk) 05:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:04, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Alright I have finished my review. I will put this on hold for 1 week for you to respond to my comments. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:32, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Prose edit

The Lead

The asana was most likely introduced into modern yoga by Krishnamacharya in the early 20th century, and taken up by his pupils such as B. K. S. Iyengar, who made the pose his signature." should probably be "The asana was most likely introduced into modern yoga by Krishnamacharya in the early 20th century and taken up by his pupils, such as B. K. S. Iyengar, who made the pose his signature."

Etymology and mythology

Done.

"The significance of dancing Shiva is indicated by his gestures:" sentence seems weird in a way.

Edited.

That's all for prose!

Referenced edit

Citation 4 needs a page number.

Added.

"This aesthetic, stretching and balancing asana develops concentration and grace" Source doesn't explcitly say it develops concentration. It instead states that it requires concentration which I feel are two different things.

Fixed.

That's all!

Copyvio edit

Earwig does not seem to find a copyvio so this section is a pass.

Broad edit

Article seems to be broad so this section is a pass.

Neutral edit

"This aesthetic, stretching and balancing asana develops concentration and grace" Is it best to say that in wikivoice?

Reworded.

Stable edit

No edits since November so this section is a pass.

Media edit

All the images are ok to use so this section is a pass.

Onegreatjoke – all done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:55, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Alright then. I can now proudly approve this nomination! Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:16, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

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