Talk:Nasreen Paracha/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by DarkGlow in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments edit
- Non-free use rationale on the image is in great condition.
- "awarded awarded" → "awarded"
- Add parts from every section to the lead to summarize the article.
- The storylines section looks good.
- As with other articles, recite references after every quote per WP:REF.
- Try to reduce the use of quotes in #Development.
- I couldn't find any actual issues at #Reception, but adding reviews from critics of her character would be nice.
- Overall, remove quotes and expand the entire article, as it only has 8 references at the moment.
- Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
- The reference after "2020 RTS Yorkshire Awards" should not be linking to highlighted text.
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