Talk:Naga Daw Oo

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Onel5969 in topic Neutrality

Neutrality

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@Onel5969: Thanks for your suggestion (POV tag) to improve my creation. I cleaned up some sentences of which I assumed they, a little bit, promote a particular point of view. Pls highlight me if there's any words or phrases or statements left to meet the WP:NPOV, i.e. to remove the tag. TIA. Zin Win Hlaing (talk) 09:12, 23 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Zin Win Hlaing, hi, I removed some more of the peacock words, and the tag. Might I suggest you give a definition for what Sāsanānuggaha means. I linked to the Burmese Buddhist titles article, but that could use some work as well, defining things for folks not familiar with the terms. Nice job, keep up the good work. Onel5969 TT me 13:10, 23 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Onel5969, Thanks. Sāsanānuggaha is a combination of Pali words sāsanā and anuggaha. Sasana means religion/ religious affairs (Śāsana) and anuggaha means support; help; assist. So, it might mean the one who support the Sasana. But I prefer a better translation. Could you please ...? How should that be? Zin Win Hlaing (talk) 05:28, 24 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Zin Win Hlaing, well, I made the attempt. Thanks for your help. Onel5969 TT me 11:47, 24 February 2021 (UTC)Reply