Talk:NSB El 17

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review
Good articleNSB El 17 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
November 29, 2009Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 16:03, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
Comments:

  1. The sentence "The units were ordered to be used on the intercity Bergen, Dovre and Sørland Lines, but was plagued with technical faults." needs to agree as in "were vs. was".
  2. In sentence "The locomotives have a 3,000 kilowatts (4,000 hp) power output and a 240 kN (54,000 lbf) tractive effort, allow the locomotive to haul a six-car train.", "allow" should be "allowing".
  3. The link for shunting needs to be disambiguated.
  4. The sentence "Tractive effort is 240 kilonewtons (54,000 lbf)." is short and should be combined with the prior sentence.

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 16:03, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Done. Thank you for the review. Arsenikk (talk) 16:22, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply
I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:28, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply