Soc314: Wikipedia Critique an Article Assignment edit

Critique #1

There are many grammar errors throughout the entire article. There are also a few run on sentences. Some obvious words are missing throughout sentences such as "the" and "as," making the article hard to read.

Critique #2

There are absolutely no reliable references on this page. In fact, there is only one single reference throughout the entire page regarding where all of this information came from. The one reference that is used is not a reliable source.

(Tnelson0312 (talk) 22:27, 23 February 2017 (UTC))Reply