Talk:My Father My King/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 23:03, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Grabbing for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 23:03, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- References are not normally used in the lead, unless you are citing controversial information. None of the information is cited is particularly controversial in my opinion, and all of it should be located in the body of the article with the appropriate citations.
- The lead needs a rather large revision. It should contain information from each section of the article. Currently, it is missing information from the “Reception” section.
- This part (Over 20 minutes long, and billed as a companion piece to the album Rock Action, a sticker on the cover) does not make sense as you are literally saying that “sticker on the cover” is “over 20 minutes long, and billed as a companion piece to the album Rock Action".
- Include the year in which Rock Action was released.
- I am not a fan of quotes in the lead so I would paraphrase here.
- Include ALT text for the infobox image.
- You say in the infobox that this is a post-rock song, but it is not supported by a citation or written anywhere in the actual article itself. Genres need to be supported through citations.
- Overview and recording
- This part (The EP was widely billed as a "companion piece" to previous album Rock Action) does not make any sense as you have not introduced the EP or even the band in the body of the article up to this point.
- Quick fail
- I will have to cut my review short here. I have already encountered rather large problems with the structure of this article. It is nowhere near ready for GAN, and will needed to be rewritten to be better present the information. I apologize for this, but I have to ✗ Fail this. Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.